Tuesday, April 29, 2014

The Adamkhuni

A long time ago, an Age before man,
Before the elves or dwarves, before stone halls or temples,
There lay a great people, a people of gods,
And in their rite they named themselves the Celestians,
And in their kingdom they lead judgement,
Goodwill and the telling of Justice


They were a small people, a council of
Eternal lords that gilded the flame
of hope,
Crushing damnation,
Creating peace


And in their grand hall lay one named Therita,
The Keeper of Gardens, of Nature, of Life.
He watched the Old,
Protected the New,
And made sure the gods did not use their power,
To too much strain.


But their was great hardships in the life of a gardener,
Of the great chief that bridled the fire
And hoisted the hearth,
His soferi*, longer than the others,
Gave into a fledgling of hart.


But there was hope, a younger peoples
Under the shield of the Great Tree,

They were small, few and civilized,
Proud yet Pious,
But one lead above the others.

Lo to behold! Crutia of Kathara, a great man,
A brave boy,
One wholst can wrestle any bull,
Tackle any Tarapricst**,

To him one day Therita came forth,
And shared stories of his troubles,
“Oh god of kings! King of Gods!”
The boy cried out in esctacy,
“I do accept of Eternal,
to guide me to my true fate.”

So the two went off,
Went going to the Garden of Gods,
As Crutia withheld all of the sites,
All the grandeur, greatness of the city.
The City of Valleys, the City of Pure.

“Crutia” said he, the one who holds Earth,
“You are of the Celestians now,
A great people with great power,
but you must learn restraint.”

And so the two went,
Teaching one and learning both,
Until the power of them was great,
And they had learned as much.

But there was one final taske,
for the child of courage,
“You must endear” Therita declared,
“You must endear the trial we all face,
of piety, justice, and good,
You must go to the cave of essences,
my son,
Learn its secrets for the light lay blue,
and the blue will guide you to yourself.”

And so the brave boy boistered off,
To the cave of champions,
Trials, enduring dreams,
With him his gold without rust,
But rust are the hearts of men
Who are too proud of what they do.

Crutia, a proud boy,
Found himself in the glow of god,
And that god beckoned to him,
And so Crutia came.

But the god was not blue,
Nor purple, nor pink,
But a vast red,
A deep cut that ran through the world,
And he told Crutia,
“Be wise, my son,
Do not make false allies,
Learn your true enemies,
And strike fear.”

And Crutia believed the god,
The cut of cuts, of wounds,
And went to Therita,
“God of kings! King of Gods!
I have learned thyself,
And am readey for my throne.”

The god looked at the boy,
Smiling, remembering his,
Descent into the cave,
The cave of blue,
And put his hand on his shoulder.

“Crutia of Kathara,
My son,
My lord of knights,
Indeed you have learned much,
And use it well I do believe,
I grant you your crown,
Throne,
And you shall reside in the place of the gods.”

And so the two lay, in the presence of power,
But Theritas was great, and basked the city,
The boy wanted gold, but he fetted dirt.

And so he went to the cave,
The cave of the red god,
And pleading for his help,
And the red god told him,

“Crutia, Crutia of Kings,
You are deserving of the crown,
The crown of gods,
Take this stake, and use it well,
For its power it will behold to you.”

And so Crutia took the Red God's advice,
And struck the stake into the throne,
And power overwhelming face he,
Yet he still felt normal,
Unaided by any but his soul.

So for the third final time,
He went to the Palace of the Red God,
And ask what happen to the stake,
And the Red God tell him

“Crutia, Leader of Gods,
You must be proud yet patient,
For the day the dove hath come to you,
You will know power,
Truth,
And your power bith great.”

And so Crutia waited a long while,
But as the god hath said, the dove came,
And Crutia hat felt power as never before,
And Therita was but of peasant,
And looked down upon him and he back

“My son, Crutia,
I trusted you with power,
But you broke your restraints,
You crossed from peace to damnation,
And you must serve justice.”

But Crutia, now powerful,
Struck that with such power,
And so Therita lay,
Mortally wounded,
But the Celestians had come.

And so Entaros, the true god,
God of Kings, King of Gods,
Spoke to Crutia,
And his voice rang into the deep bellows of the Earth.

“Crutia, you have betrayed the Gods,
And with this you will not be reprimanded,
Therita trusted you, with good and with gold,
But I will not make the same mistake.”

And so Crutia was banished to the depths of the Red God,
And Therita healed,
Put back into power,
And he held no mistake of his fault
In his action.

“But my son, there is no fault,”
The God of Kings told the lord,
“Some men are tainted,
Others are purified,
We cannot see through these things,
We may only tell in time.”

And that is the story of Adamkhuni,
The tale of Gods,
Of darkness and taint,
But justice and purity.

*= Winter
**=Now extinct, two-legged birdlike creature. Thought to have existed during the writing of this tale.

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Sunday, April 27, 2014

OTACOV

Laurence was a young billionaire with old problems. He stared into the depths of his fireplace, continually cracking and blowing with every draft of wind that came into the house. It rained outside, and the sky covered in clouds. The ambiance and atmosphere of a warm comforting place matched with a cloudy exterior would calm some, but not Laurence. His associate stood facing away from Laurence's red leather chair, staring into the shadow.


“So, you authorized it?”


“Yes.”


“You fucking authorized it?”


“Yes.”


“Are you out of your god damn mind?” His associate snapped back so loudly it nearly interrupted Laurence's tranced state of mind. “You have backed yourself in a legal hole so fucking big you'd be lucky if you got a death sentence.”


Laurence was unfazed, pouring himself another shot of whiskey like a gear in the machine. “That, of course, is if law enforcement ever finds out.”


“Except our employees aren't exactly our friends.” The associate paced back and forth, seemingly stressed by the situation. “Now that they're out of the contract, they can rat us out anytime. All law enforcement needs to do is sweeten the deal.”


“So? We renew the contract.”


The associate glared into the face of Laurence, who Laurence tried to avoid. “Renew the fucking contract? What are you going to do, give them another job? I can't even believe the first damn job. A high school? You bombed a fucking high school? What was your 'statement of reason' behind that again?”


Laurence took another sip of whiskey, taking his time with the shot. He seemed more focused on the flame than the conversation. “I did it because I wanted to.”


“You did it because you fucking wanted to! Isn't that perfect! Inciting chaos everywhere, you're just like a super-villain. Fan-fucking-tastic. Except for one thing, hotshot – this is the real world. There aren't any super-villains here, you understand me?”


Laurence did not respond.


“Listen, if media gets attention that you're holding an entire body of trained assassins at your disposal at all times, people are going to get suspicious.”


Finally, Laurence stood up, redirecting his focus from the fire to full concentration on his associate. “That's why the renewal isn't going on my name, it will be on yours.”


The associate stared in straight in the face, shocked. “No, no, no, no-” went on his refusal, “There's no fucking way you can get me to agree on that. You see, I don't exactly condone your actions.”


Laurence's tall stature casted a shadow over the associate's body. His eyes stared into the others. “Listen, Henry. I got lucky. I made a business, I made good investments. Now I'm a billionaire. I'm a billionaire who's young, alone, and bored out of his mind. This wasn't my decision, this was the decision of the people who put me here.”


Henry the associate began to talk, but his words driveled from his mouth. He hesitated, then finally decided what he was going to say. “Jesus, look at you. You just want to make a statement. A big bang out before you die lonely with billions at your disposal. You want to generate chaos, that's all you care about. 'Oh, what's on our agenda today, Mr. Laurence? Shoot a few elementary school students? How about kidnap some female celebrity?' You might as well find out some way to murder the entire fucking senate!”


The associate was clearly angered, but the calm of Laurence's face continued unsubsided. Finally, Henry was subdued.


“You know what? Fine! I'll sign my name right on your killing spree! In fact, I'll sign it with god damn, fucking INK!”


The associate began to storm out, but before he did he stopped and turned to utter one more word of caution.


“Also, if I get caught, I'll be the one telling law enforcement. And I'll give it everything in my power to make sure you get what you deserve.” With the furious shutting of the door, a loud bang symbolized the exit of Henry, to which Laurence looked down, grinning to himself, and whispered.




I know you will.”

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Thursday, April 24, 2014

Her Name Was Amanda

It all started out as a normal afternoon for me. I got home much earlier than my wife most days, as her days as a nurse at Mannheitten Hospital for the most part took up all of her time. I had one of those simple office jobs at the IT department for my workplace, so my stay was much smaller.


Anyway, that night I laid on the couch watching TV when our home phone started to ring. There were few people we knew who called that phone, so it mostly made up of telemarketers or pranksters. As I turned my head to notice the caller ID, I found that, like I thought, it was no one we heard of.


This one, however, was different. While most ID's telemarkers were things such as “Valley Insurance” or “Hordson Attorneys”, this one read as “[UNTITLE AXCO93HH]”. I took a minimal glance at it until I realized it was likely that just someone changed their own ID as a prank, and continued watching the almost marathon news coverage of the Steubenville High School bombings.


However, during the coverage my power went into an outage. Cursing under my breath, I went to check the breaker box until I heard something coming from the living room – the home phone ringing.


Sure enough, it was the same peculiar ID. I took this as a sign the power might've been back on, so I tried turning on the TV. No juice, yet the phone continued ringing.


Finally I succumbed to all temptations and picked up the phone, What I found on the other end made this call even more strange.


On the other end came the sound of gurgling, rushing water. At least, that would be my best description of it. Any voice was inaudible, drowned out by the sound of a liquid bubbling and a slight static scratching on the other end.


“Hello?” I dumbfounded-ly spoke into the phone. Of course, I received no answer – just the continuous sound of rushing water. As the noise grew on, it became tedious, so I ended the call.


Just like that, the lights turned back on again.


You must be thinking I had to have thought something was wrong, but truth be told I am the farthest from a skeptical thinker. Everything had to have an explanation, or a coincidence. Though I was slightly confused by the call, I continued on as normal. This was my first mistake.


A few hours into the day, my wife had still not arrived yet. I moved from my television viewing to web browsing, using my laptop on the couch. Until, of course, as all strange tales go, there was a knock at the door.


Now, my wife still wasn't expected for about a hour more, and she called me before coming, so I took the knock, once again, as some advertiser. The knocking continued for awhile, until it eventually ceased.


What replaced it, though, put a straight chill down my spine.


Rushing water. The same exact noise I heard from the phone, static and all. For the first time in what seemed like my lifetime, my panic meter turned on.


I ran for the phone, as the knocking and rushing continued. Realizing what I had gotten myself into, I made a rapid attempt to dial 911, before I realized the flashing words on the screen:


:DISCONNECTED:


From the other side of the house, I heard the door open.


All had seemed lost, but there was one last drastic hope. I ran through the living room, past the hallway and down into my office. From my bottom, least-used cabinet, I pulled the revolver out.


Putting six .45 shots in and loading, I waited in the corner, my gun aimed at the door. My heart was pounding, yet it seemed the footsteps getting closer and closer seemed to overwhelm the sound of my own despair.


The knob turned.


Out came a young woman – about her later 20s. She had crisp, auburn hair. Short and curled. Her light green eyes penetrated mine. I could recognize her from every way I looked.


It was my wife. Yet, it wasn't. There was something off about her figure. Something uncanny. Something only I would notice.


“Who are you?” I demanded, my gun shaking in my hand.


“I am Amanda.” her calm, soothing voice answered for me.



It was not my wife's name, nor my wife's voice. I was suddenly relaxed by this figure, but stood straight up again realizing what I was facing. This was no woman, this was a monster. And her name was Amanda.

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Saturday, April 19, 2014

Astuka Looks Back - EMPTY WORLD

I'm not exactly sure when this will be released (if ever), as I am writing this before the blog has actually been created. Regardless of that, in this sub-series (as I like to call it) I will be talking about a multitude of stories I created when I was young and, for the most part, really really stupid. Join me in dissecting their content and proving that I really am probably just a poser.


The TPNF Years – 2009-2010

A long, long, time ago in a galaxy far, far, away when people actually played Poptropica, a friend and I made a website named TPNF (that's the abbreviation for “The Poptropica News Flash”) on Wordpress (You can still go there!). I found the blog as a good place to put some of my first stories on there, as much requested by the other friend who I shared most of them with. Though these are not among the VERY first (and, unfortunately, not as funny) they still have quite a bit of error.


STORY ONE: Empty World

Honestly I'm not sure if this or the first draft of GoE came first so this could be either the second or first one posted on the site, yet it was still the first story that I made that was not based upon a roleplay or anything else. That's right, Empty World is all OC, though its quality is another question entirely.

Including the fact that it was the first OC, it was also one of the first (of many stories) never to be finished. There's a reason I went into short story making and not novels, and it's because I probably don't have the required attention span to make one. Out of all my attempts at long, drawn out stories, I only finished one (which we'll tackle later) and that was it. So this story is only the first two chapters + a prologue and then a synopsis of what happens chapters 3-14. Fascinating.

Prologue

Oh, a prologue! I LOVE prologues. Practically every early story of mine had a prologue. I'm not sure why, maybe it's just because I HAD to explain what happened previously at the beginning of the book for some reason and couldn't just explain it as the story progressed.



You know that feeling you get in your stomach? The “butterflies”. What a name, what a name.

Excuse me? What the fuck is this? It's like I purposely meant it this line to be extremely cheesy and stupid and out of place. Oh wait, I did.

I still remember that day. 2089, at Moon Outpost Uria I. We all saw a ship. An abnormal ship. Almost surrealistic. It landed on the far side. I turn back to our once great earth. 32 years ago, I think. I was eighteen. They had created a new vaccine called Oia 245. Everyone was getting it. It was said to bring eternal life.

I want to point out the fact that this was 32 years ago and he was 18 means he would be 50 at the time of actually writing the story, however it is described and pretty much known as a fact to everyone around him that at the very most he's 26. I never make my characters that old, and I probably meant the “18” in my mind to be a “9” I was not a smart kid back then.

This could however be explained with the fact that the “vaccine” (What does it vaccinate? Death?) that brings eternal life worked for him, but that can be debunked two ways: 1. It is later said that he never took it, and that everyone who did pretty much went batshit crazy, and 2. I would've never thought of trying to explain that because I thought it seemed normal. Once again, I couldn't count.

But it went wrong. All wrong. Our great world went into chaos.All of us got evacuated to several different outposts. Uria I, Sulnan IV, Reiven XI, and Donian VIII. A group of officials came to the landing point of the aircraft. They never returned. We we’re all scared. Yet, we knew something had to be done.

Wait, what the fuck? What happened? What does a UFO have anything to do with the virus? He somehow sets both off as if he was just saying “Oh yeah there was a ship but then our world went into chaos for some other reason but that's not really important either.” This guy is possibly the worst story narrator ever, not only does he make shit confusing but he seems so uninterested about it. Plus the fact that he speaks in short sentences doesn't really help his case.

Chapter 1

As I still stand at my window, thinking about the officers, someone passes by me. The cold air stays in the same spot, but slowly disappears. “Who’s there?” I ask, but no answer. I look around, but I don’t see anything. Right before I get back to the window, I see something in the corner of my eye. Its… horns? I go back to the spot. Nothing there. I go to get my shotgun in my basement. I still remember that horrific day. They killed my father, and I killed them. I killed them with their own. I killed them. KILLED them.

Here our narrator writes. In a different format. Similar to if he was ADHD. Oh sorry, I was just copying the same format as the narrator. Seriously, not only is he emotionless but he cannot FUCKING FOCUS on a single topic. It's ridiculous.

As I go back in the basement where my shotgun was, I see footsteps on the ground. I ignore them and keep moving. I open the cupboard to where my gun was and…  IT’S GONE.

Man, I can't wait for the explanation to the cause of the narrator's ADD episode.

I hurry back to upstairs, where I hear thumping. I grab a vase, and slowly go toward the thumping. Then, I hit whatever it is in the head. It goes down to the ground, covered in blood. “**** it, David!!!” he said. I saw his face and noticed them it was the  head of officers in Uria, Major Calrone.

FUCKING EXCUSE ME

What was the horns? The cold spot? The thumping? When people walk, it doesn't sound like thumping, it sounds like footsteps. He tries so hard its almost as if I was trying to allure to the fact that it was a monster but then make it something else--

Oh wait, that's exactly what I did. Instead of being really sneaky and general with my words like you're supposed to, however, I just made it seem like it was going the complete opposite way to the point where it WAS going the complete opposite way until I changed it at the last minute.

Sorry, sir.” I said. “I didn’t mean-” “**** you, if I could, I would kill you with your own ****ing rifle right now!!!” he interrupts.

Them censors.

Then I look at him. He looks at me. “Sorry, son.” he says, “Go upstairs with the shotgun while I board up the windows and doors.”
But why? Whats happening?” I ask.

What? Are we actually going to get a non-half assed explanation to what's going on? Impossible!

Its the president. He wants everyone near the far side of the moon, which means Uria and Sulnan, to defend themselves.” “What, a upcoming alien invasion?” I joke, but Calrone has a serious look on his face. “David” he says. “The police found them.”  “Are they alive?” I ask.  “No,” he says. “They’ve been cut in half.”

I've seen some really anti-climatic stuff. I've seen anti-climatic movie points, anti-climatic twists, but nothing, NOTHING could prepare me for how anti-climatic the end of this chapter is. Really? “They've been cut in half”? Could you really think of NOTHING better than that?

Chapter 2

Oh boy.


Me and Ryan keep walking to the station.”So, how long have you been in the force?” Ryan said, his leg still bleeding. “I was never in the force.” I reply. “Then how did you get that shotgun?” asked Ryan. I didn’t answer. I didn’t want too. It didn’t seem right.

Wait, excuse me if I'm wrong, but where we last left off weren't we with Calrone? Who's this guy? What station? Besides the leg this is pretty much the exact opposite- oh no, wait, he hit him in the head. In that case it IS the exact opposite ordeal that we were going through last chapter. Thankfully, our narrator is still being horribly bad at being mysterious and still ADD.

We arrive at the Gas Station. I try to open the door, put it doesn’t budge. “Doors locked.” I say. ” **** knobbed doors” Ryan says, and with a mighty kick of the foot that isn’t wounded, knocks down the door.

I'm almost positive this would make him fall.

We keep looking around, but see no one. “Hello?” we say together at once. We look everywhere, but finally I hear Ryan say ” David, I think you got to take a look at this.” We go over to the register counter, and find something disturbing.

He’s dead” Ryan says, “Poor guy”.  On the ground, there was a dead body, which had a name tag that said “Jim”. “Poor Jim.” Ryan says. “Hey whats that..” I say. Ryan lifts up the body and we both gasp.On his stomach, the numbers  588 were carved into it. “Oh my god, They got him.”

Do I even need to explain why this is bad? This is pretty much the equivalent of basic 4th grade writing, especially the “Hey whats that...” part. Seriously? Also, the second time a chapter has ended in a horrible climax.

Chapter 3-14

Oh thank god, finally the summary.

As you know, a group of colonists live at outposts on the Moon, some did on Mars, also. The Earth was destroyed NOT because of the drug,  what David thinks.

Man I'm glad that was cleared up, though I'm pretty sure there was no mention of Mars outposts and David (who I am assuming is the narrator) didn't think the Earth was destroyed.

Have you ever heard movie previews for The Road? Thats what the story is like.

So basically not only did I try to make this story completely with shock filler but I actually copied it off of someone else's shock filler. Classy.

Calrone gets killed by whatever those things are, and then it is only Ryan and David, living to go no where. Then that changes, when they found a girl named Bess. Yeah, to make the long story short, they become the only humans on the moon, Ryan kills Bess and eats her, and David does the same to Ryan, and then David shoots himself. That’s the summary.


Yep, that's some pretty plan shock filler. Though I have no idea how that relates to The Road in any way but the fact that it's shock filler, but I'm sure a connection was made somewhere along the line. Also I love how the summary explains less than 20% of the actual story, but besides that I think it's ready to go to another story. Next time. Eventually.

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Friday, April 18, 2014

Back with more soon

Sorry for the many days of absence... some stuff happened that prohibited me from continuing to write the blog.

Stories will come back again soon on an every other day basis -- I'll also try to get some advertising in to get this as popular as the astukagaming blog.

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